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The Den's avatar

So good…my goodness ❤️

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Oh wow. Thank you so much.

Quill & Biscuit's avatar

Woah! That was like stepping onto Its a Small World and having it suddenly turn into Oblivion* without warning!

*Insert vertical drop coaster of your choice if you’re unfamiliar with the rides at Alton Towers 🤣🤣🤣

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Thank you. Yeah. I didn’t have much time to ease into this with only 300 words. When the idea hit me I kind of went. Oh…. Now that’s terrifying.

Quill & Biscuit's avatar

The lack of easing in was why I loved it!

Willow's avatar

Wow 🤍🤍🤍

C. Lamas | The Next Chapter's avatar

And now I’m going to live literally from here on out

Holly's avatar

Oh no poor grace !

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Oh no indeed. Thank you so much for reading!

RiseToFreeThinking.'s avatar

For reference to anyone else I made a competition and this was quite tame compared to the premise set for the fiction competition... Well done, I may have to re-read when more entry's come in...

So far you're the only one, so you have pole position.

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Woo hoo! I’m winning! lol.

RiseToFreeThinking.'s avatar

you have won. my other subscribers are not who their subscription makes them seem. They care little to nothing of my interests. Well played sir. I will soon begin creating ‘art’ based from this story about ‘faith and grace’.

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

That is crazy! 😳 Somehow aweful but with such fantastic writing! 🥰🖤

Words about things and stuff's avatar

I’d been playing with the whole wish gone wrong idea and then this hit me!

Thorn's avatar

So creepy! Great writing!

Sable Lux Thorne's avatar

Oh my. I kinda want to do an inspired by short. I need more time in the day.

Words about things and stuff's avatar

This one was only 300 words-ish. It probably took longer than it should have because I kept cutting and cutting the words to get it right. Super short stories are fun though! I say go for it… time willing.