Love is a lot of things.
At first I really thought it would be a magical, lovely happy-end, but then it got dark within two sentences! 😳 Really cool! 🖤
I’m so glad you liked it. I’m a bit behind… on everything… but the image gave me an idea and I had to run with it!
Well, that was a surprise ending!
Thank you… for this one the idea sort of came backwards. I knew how it ended. I just needed to figure out how to get there.
Haha. Loved it Dave. Such a great ending, and one I wasn't expecting at all!
I love the way it's written as well as the story. It feels almost bureaucratic and noted down in a way an accountant would.
Smashing response to the prompt!
Nice. Thank you so much! I actually had that in mind a little bit when writing it. Very matter of fact.
Ace. It works really well :)
I love the image of her having red paint on her hands, it feels sinister, like what’s coming, and then Bam! That’s it. Very well written.
Thank you so much! I was hoping for a BAM moment. I’m glad it delivered!
Geez.
Love a turn!
Thank you so much!
The warm beginning makes the ending hit pretty hard.
Funny thing is I sort of came up with this backwards and had to figure out how to work my way up to the ending.
You did so quite well. <3
Why thank you!
My pleasure!
The twist was epic!
Oh my gosh. Thank you!
You'll never get anywhere with this blithe, ungrounded optimism, Flopsy.
Love is when your happiness is dependent upon another person's happiness
Plot twist, another day in paradise.... She ended up on anti-psychotic meds and he ended up being raped by an angry mob. And his son killed one of them.
They didn't believe it because they assumed he was a little bitch.
So he never got charged.
And the mole dug on....
At first I really thought it would be a magical, lovely happy-end, but then it got dark within two sentences! 😳 Really cool! 🖤
I’m so glad you liked it. I’m a bit behind… on everything… but the image gave me an idea and I had to run with it!
Well, that was a surprise ending!
Thank you… for this one the idea sort of came backwards. I knew how it ended. I just needed to figure out how to get there.
Haha. Loved it Dave. Such a great ending, and one I wasn't expecting at all!
I love the way it's written as well as the story. It feels almost bureaucratic and noted down in a way an accountant would.
Smashing response to the prompt!
Nice. Thank you so much! I actually had that in mind a little bit when writing it. Very matter of fact.
Ace. It works really well :)
I love the image of her having red paint on her hands, it feels sinister, like what’s coming, and then Bam! That’s it. Very well written.
Thank you so much! I was hoping for a BAM moment. I’m glad it delivered!
Geez.
Love a turn!
Thank you so much!
The warm beginning makes the ending hit pretty hard.
Funny thing is I sort of came up with this backwards and had to figure out how to work my way up to the ending.
You did so quite well. <3
Why thank you!
My pleasure!
The twist was epic!
Oh my gosh. Thank you!
You'll never get anywhere with this blithe, ungrounded optimism, Flopsy.
Love is when your happiness is dependent upon another person's happiness
Plot twist, another day in paradise.... She ended up on anti-psychotic meds and he ended up being raped by an angry mob. And his son killed one of them.
They didn't believe it because they assumed he was a little bitch.
So he never got charged.
And the mole dug on....