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Brittany 👀's avatar

I really liked this!

And I must tell you that this part literally made me cackle: “As a diabetic, he circled it more because of that than for the case.”

And the part where he knew he said the expression backwards on purpose!

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Why thank you! I’m glad you liked it. Part three will be out this week.

Maya's avatar

A great beginning to a mystery.

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

Awesome! I love that case and I like Eddie as a character. 😁 The line: "It's hard to talk... you know... to normal people in this line of work." Could be straight from Hollywood. 🖤🥳

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Thank you! Honestly that like too a lot of work. Finding a plausible way for a cop to just hand over information wasn’t so easy in my head.

Clara J. Thorne's avatar

I hate bingo. But I love mysteries :)

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Actually I’m not a huge fan of bingo either.

Speaking of Bingo, I once aided police in ending a fraudulent bingo ring. True story.

Matt likes to do things.😜's avatar

I know I'm coming in on part two, but this is good.

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Aww dang it. I should have attached the link to part one. I tried to attach it, but it wouldn’t let me. It’s there though. Check it out.

Oh and thank you!!!