Oh my gosh, this is so good!!! It had humor, pathos, fear, mystery, supernatural tension. It's like a really good "Twilight Zone" episode. So impressive.
You have a way with taking me by surprise each and every time! Which is crazy because I'm aware now that things are never as they seem lol. So so freaking good!
I also agree with another comment about your stories having such a "Twilight Zone" feel to them. I've probably said this before, the show is one of my favorites haha.
Part of this one had actually been brewing in my mind for about a week. That’s when whatever happened to my eye happened. Eyelid got all puffy and messed with my vision. For a short while I did sort of see…. I don’t know… trails of people moving around… like following after them. That got me thinking “what if?”
This is so incredibly cool I would read an entire novel based on this is he a ghost did his sister possess him!? It could go so many ways I will admit that at the very beginning when he was talking about how stupid dares were i thought i was reading a story from your goat 😂
Oh my gosh, this is so good!!! It had humor, pathos, fear, mystery, supernatural tension. It's like a really good "Twilight Zone" episode. So impressive.
Thank you so much. Wow. A Twilight Zone comparison. If I wasn’t lying down already I’d have to lie down after that one.
Rod Serling would be proud of you!
Imagine if you will….
I like it!
Ooh, I love the uncanny factor! Kind of reminds me of Brian Evenson.
Nice! Thank you so much!
You have a way with taking me by surprise each and every time! Which is crazy because I'm aware now that things are never as they seem lol. So so freaking good!
I also agree with another comment about your stories having such a "Twilight Zone" feel to them. I've probably said this before, the show is one of my favorites haha.
If I’m giving twilight some vibes that’s a massive compliment. Thank you!
This is great!
Thank you so much!
Wow! This is great! Full of unexpected twists! Bravo!
Thank you for reading. I’m so glad you liked it!
Wait. What? He fell? Not her? Dead?
I left it open on purpose. What do you think happened?
I thought he fell, not her. Then she ran back, but he was somehow with her?
Two realities at once. Totally whack-a-do!
Where do you even come up with this shit 👏👏👏
Oh and thank you for reading!
Part of this one had actually been brewing in my mind for about a week. That’s when whatever happened to my eye happened. Eyelid got all puffy and messed with my vision. For a short while I did sort of see…. I don’t know… trails of people moving around… like following after them. That got me thinking “what if?”
Oh, Stephen 😢
Thanks. Or not thanks. I mean it is pretty sad.
And wonderfully written!
Aww thanks! You're the best!
This was brilliant !! Wow
Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it!
Wow … this was so good… I was in the edge the whole time 🧡
Oh wow. Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it
This is so incredibly cool I would read an entire novel based on this is he a ghost did his sister possess him!? It could go so many ways I will admit that at the very beginning when he was talking about how stupid dares were i thought i was reading a story from your goat 😂
That is something Falcing the goat would think.
Thank you for reading. I thought it was fun with this one to leave it open enough for whoever reads it to make up their in minds on some things.
Clever!