Brilliant! I love this. I'm actually endlessly fascinated by stories that merge tech and "real life" and it's something I sometimes explore in my own work. Very Chronenbergian.
I feel you. I have lots of older stories I have mixed feelings about. Some I’ve touched up a bit and others I might rework more in the future but not sure if it’s worth the effort. Maybe I’ll just post the original version with a disclaimer like you did :)
There were two other stories that I found. I’m no sure whether to do what I did here or whether I want to re-work them a bit. Like this one, I like the ideas, not so much the implementation.
Apparently the banana wasn't such a healthy snack and watch out for pirate flags online!
Such a fun read! Thanks 16 year old Mouthy Heart!
Brilliant! I love this. I'm actually endlessly fascinated by stories that merge tech and "real life" and it's something I sometimes explore in my own work. Very Chronenbergian.
Probably because I wrote this so long ago I’m torn between loving the idea and wishing I had written it differently. I’m so glad you liked it!
I feel you. I have lots of older stories I have mixed feelings about. Some I’ve touched up a bit and others I might rework more in the future but not sure if it’s worth the effort. Maybe I’ll just post the original version with a disclaimer like you did :)
There were two other stories that I found. I’m no sure whether to do what I did here or whether I want to re-work them a bit. Like this one, I like the ideas, not so much the implementation.
Wow, what have I just read! 😳 This is nuts, of course as always, in the best way possible! 😂 A rollercoaster it was! 👍🏻 Loved it! 🥰
Thank you!
That was sooo good! Wow