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Alicia's avatar

I honor Floyd for his huge sacrifice. Moment of silence... sorry, that was bad.

Petra's avatar

This reads so casually until it suddenly slams into the ending. Poor Floyd. Was he really such a nuisance?

Words about things and stuff's avatar

He was a bit rough, but I liked him. It’s a shame really.

Thank you so much for reading!

Petra's avatar

He was quite likable. And you’re welcome. <3

RiseToFreeThinking.'s avatar

Wild

James (HVR)'s avatar

Wait... so he was the noise?!

Words about things and stuff's avatar

I don’t think he meant to be, but he was definitely connected somehow.

James K's avatar

I'm sorry. What did you say? My ears are ringing.👂

Gary L Taylor's avatar

I very much enjoyed that. Great ending, too. Didn't see it coming.

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

Another banger, David! 😈🖤 Loved that ending so much! Really cool! 🖤

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Thank you so much! Would you believe with this one I honestly didn’t know how it was going to end until I got there?

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

That is the best feeling (at least for me), when that happens in a story! And these are the stories I like the most! 🖤🖤

Words about things and stuff's avatar

It does feel good. It’s like the story went, “hey man, just write down wha I tell ya, okay?”

Rebekah Mallory's avatar

It is so amazing when you just run with it! Oh, and I’m, um, sorry Floyd. Sometimes sacrifices must be made to the writing gods.

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Poor guy never knew what hit him…. Literally I guess.