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Aaliya's avatar

What an eerie and captivating tale!!

What an eerie and captivating tale! The way Julia’s harmless little phrase, “it’s settled then,” transforms from a tool of social control into a desperate plea in the midst of supernatural terror is chilling. The build-up from an ordinary afternoon tea to a storm of bargains and forfeit is so well paced, and the ending with the yellow butterfly is both haunting and poetic.

Great piece of writing ♥️♥️

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Lovely story. Great setting and I like that you don't over explain the mom's history. It's implied through action.

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